Tuesday, October 20, 2015


 An event I had covered back in the Fall/Winter of 2005. Yes, that long ago, yet the event is prominent in my mind. I wrote an article published in SCBWI Metro New York:

A Panel Discussion: The Role of Children’s Book Agents

in the Literary Marketplace

 A snowstorm hovered over the metropolitan area. Nevertheless, I was eager to attend the SCBWI event. Before, the event, I was treated to dinner with members of SCBWI and the agents. WOW! A night to remember. 
I am posting this news now because I will be attending an up-coming Agents' Panel Event on November 10th. Not as the writer,  but as a member of SCBWI. I am looking forward to be in the audience and meeting the panel of agents.
 Connecting with agents in any way, is a plus, to the ultimate goal of getting one’s book published.

A Panel Discussion: The Role of Children’s Book Agents

in the Literary Marketplace

by Nanette J. Purcigliotti

            On March 8 at the Tuesday Professional Series, snow flurries loomed outdoors, but indoors Barry Goldblatt, Ronnie Ann Herman and Scott Treimel, three distinguished literary agents, focused on the role children’s book agents play in helping writers and illustrators become published authors. The audience was warmed by the spirited discussion. 
Barry Goldblatt opened the discussion by stating how his publishing background and “natural affinity” to recognize a manuscript that is “brilliantly written” led him to open the Barry Goldblatt Literary Agency in September 2000. After starting as a rights assistant at Dutton Children’s Books, he first moved to the Putnam & Grosset Group, and then later to Orchard Books, where he negotiated hundreds of author/illustrator contracts and license agreements. As an agent, Goldblatt specializes in YA and middle grade fiction, but he also handles picture book writers and illustrators.
What is the role of a children’s book agent? According to Goldblatt, an agent leads authors to the right match with an editor. Agents know their way around the marketplace and know what editors want to acquire. Goldblattt believes that a good agent can influence an author’s work from beginning to end. A good agent evaluates and negotiates the contract, getting the client the highest advance possible, and then sees that the client is paid in a timely fashion. 
“I think of my clients as my extended family,” he remarked. Knowing how lonely the writing life can be, he fosters close relationships with his clients by taking them on “marketing retreats” where they can meet and learn from each other. He also advises them to form critique groups to fine tune their manuscripts.
What does Goldblatt look for in a manuscript? “Great writing” and stories that are “on the edge and offbeat.” Books on his list that draw him into the story are boy proof” by Cecil Castellucci, Rhymes With Witches by Lauren Myracle, and Stained by Jennifer Richard Jacobson. But, he cautioned, “There are no such things as trends. You should write something that you feel passionate about.”
            Ronnie Ann Herman founded the Herman Agency, Inc. in 1999 after working as art director at Random House for ten years, and art director, vice president and associate publisher at Grosset & Dunlap (Penguin Books) for nine years. Herman represents artists and authors, but concentrates on art. She specializes in books for all ages and other supplementary materials, such as magazines, cartoons and licensed characters.
            Having published eight of her own children’s books as well as being a talented designer and painter, Herman shares her knowledge with illustrators and offers artistic and editorial suggestions. She encourages artists to be both author and illustrator because she finds it easier to sell art if there’s a story that goes with it. Otherwise art can sit in a file somewhere with just a small chance of being bought. “You must have a story if you have a sketch,” she said. But, she was quick to note, “The book has to be as good as the art.”
“I am looking for what I love and what would sell,” she said. “I’m completely loyal to my artists and will keep them on and get them work.” About 90% of her clients make a living through her representation. Herman negotiates contracts with her clients’ interests at heart and sees that they don’t sign away their rights. Like Goldblatt, her clients are her “extended family.”
There are no easy paths to get an interview with an art director. Herman knows the marketplace and can open doors by contacting the right editors and art directors that match the artists' genre. She advised artists to explore the educational market, particularly because the picture book market is currently slow.  Educational publishing is a good way for artists to break into the field; the turnaround is fast, with 10 days to produce the sketches, and it generates quicker financial rewards.
Scott Treimel (Scott Treimal NY) handles all the complex details of selling a book, including contracts, copyrights, e-rights, foreign rights and movie rights. Prior to starting his agency in 1995, he worked at Curtis Brown, Ltd., Scholastic, Inc., United Features Syndicate, Warner Bros., and International Publishing. He specializes in children’s books of all ages, from board books through teen novels.  
Treimel wants to represent authors with books that are “down right well-written.” If the book becomes a really big sell, he knows how to negotiate a fair deal that protects the author financially. “I’m careful about every little detail,” Treimel said.
He works with authors to fine-tune their manuscripts by offering workshop topics in the craft of writing, author-agent relationships, contracts, and editorial and career development. Although fantasy is not on his list, he is interested in YA and funny middle grade books.  “Something fabulous.  No unicorns.  No rainbows.  No fairies.”
 Treimel agreed with the importance of having a good author-agent relationship. He works with an author before sending a manuscript out to ensure that it is at its highest professional level. He often suggests ideas that can add the needed spark to an author’s book.
The evening drew to a close with questions directed to the agents regarding submission policies, query letters, networking, and critique group issues. The audience was advised to check the agents’ Web sites. Web sites are a good place to look for agents that match your particular interests or specialty. The agents all agreed that they should be contacted first before an editor. Otherwise, if the editor turns your work down, the agents won’t be interested. If you do get an editor interested, however, let the agents work out the rough spots and make the deal, so that you can keep a good relationship with the publishing house. All the agents agreed that if you are passionate about your book, never give up. They, too, will never give up believing it will sell.
In the end, everyone went away with insightful information knowing that the role agents play in the marketplace helps authors and illustrators get published.

Thursday, May 7, 2015


I read Chris Eboch's review in the SCBWI Bulletin, about the "Kindle Kids's Book Creator,"---it only enforced my delight in using I-BOOK AUTHOR to build my I-Books. From what I've read the Kindle version had some drawbacks. Anyway, I'm a Mac lover. The love of the Mac has been with me forever. I've got I-Book Author software. I created two books so far with the program. The Myth of Cyber City--A journey into cyberspace, into the phenomena of Information Art--where cyber robots build mysterious complex structure--on the back roads of Cyber City.

A Blueprint in the Wind. A memory book designed for my brother, Tom Parisi. My brother's music and his illustrations are in that book and live on in cyberspace.

Having produced two books, I decided to add another. The Myth of Orpheus. I am editing the text. I've got the illustrations. The music for my book is forthcoming.  The I-Book is the perfect vehicle for digital art and music. Oh, I did show my art to an agent, but she said, something like, "I want traditional drawings."

So that's my history of using I-Book Author.  I went the I-Book route.

Thursday, April 16, 2015


Met with Matthew Thomas at the Marymount Manhattan Book Club. I was particularly interested in attending the event for a number of reasons. I wanted to ask Thomas a million questions about his book. How much research went into his book. Did he have an outside editor. How did he figure out the structure of his book. As he told it to us, research was prime. Reading his book, WE ARE NOT OURSELVES, it was obvious he was well read on the subject of the dreaded disease, Alzheimer. We discovered his father was an Alzheimer victim. And I do mean victim. He said he thought of writing this book as a memoir, but decided better to go with fiction. I'm glad he did. It's a powerful book with reality lurking in the pages.

I asked if he edited his own book. He said he edited his own book, with his wife's input. He wrote his book the old fashioned way, ink and paper. It worked for him. He sent out his manuscript to a number of "top" agents. He said he waited ten years before he felt it ready to send out. But when he sent it out, it was gobbled up by the  right agent and was published.

What I was most interested in was how long it took him to figure out the structure of his book. His book begins in chronological order. Okay, you guessed it. My book begins in chronological order. I have lots of backstory. Now, I feel, maybe, just maybe I'm going in the right direction.

I'm editing my book as I go along. Then my husband, Bob. comments.

We shared a great night with Matthew Thomas who is now a famous author.

Wednesday, April 16, 2014



In the November 17, 2009, Writer Unboxed—blog post, “The wild and the holy city: settings for fantasy,” Sophie Masson, shared her thoughts that setting and atmosphere are an important part of a novel. As she states, “Setting and atmosphere are always (at least to me!) an important part of a novel, but in fantasy they are often much, much more than just background or wallpaper for your story. In fact they can loom very large indeed, almost like characters in their own right, whether major or minor.

By using essential sensory details, better known as “tools” you can create the perfect atmosphere in your novel. Whether your novel is set in the genre of mystical realism or fantasy, setting can play up the atmosphere where your characters’ live. 

In my own novel, I have used setting as character; not that setting is a character, but how the characters experience the sensory elements. Is the table dressed in a fine linen cloth, decorated with fine china and crystal, or is the table set with mugs and plates offered in the Pottery Barn. What happened on that morning at breakfast? In a fantasy setting, the field is open to all thematic possibilities. 

What comes to mind is a table set by Nancy Mather, under the sponsorship of the President’s College. She participated in a fund raiser event for Elizabeth Park, widely known for its expansive rose gardens. Nancy’s idea for a fantasy tea is set as if five Shakespearean heroines were attending. 

Nancy's imaginative five characters’ are, Perdita from, Winter’s Tale, Juliet, from, Romeo and Juliet, Ophelia, from Hamlet, Rosalind, from, As you Like It, and Titania, from Midsummer’s Night Dream. The symbols reflecting the heroines were placed on the table by Lynne Gavin, along with the flower arrangements. The event was housed in a beautiful women’s club in Hartford, Connecticut. 

The Shakespearean themed “Set the Table” demonstrates how table setting can create atmosphere for a particular scene in a novel.

Friday, January 10, 2014


Fiction writers take note. Well, I took note when I’d read the feature “true” story, A Speck in the Sea, by Paul Tough. Tough begins the true saga,in the January 5, 2014 issue of The New York Times Magazine— with a question printed on the front cover: HOW DID JOHN ALDRIDGE SURVIVE. I was immediately drawn into the story by the provocative question. All the elements of a best seller was evident as I’d read the opening sentence.

“LOOKING BACK, John Aldridge knew it was a stupid move. When you’re alone on the deck of a lobster boat in the middle of the night, 40 miles off the tip of Long Island, you don’t take chances.”

BACKSTORY, PLACE, SETTING, TENSION, CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT, SURPRISE-- all the elements of a best seller is evident in this non-fiction story.

As Tough wrote Aldridge’s tale, I, was swept away imagining how Aldridge would survive. I read on. What was he thinking when he was treading water reaching down to pull off his left boot. The boots, I later learned ultimately saved him. How he lived each minute in the black ocean surprised me. And I love to be surprised when reading and writing a novel. How the Coast Guard worked to pull him out of the sea must be read to be believed.

Hope I didn’t reveal too much of the fisherman’s story, but wanted to show how a good non-fiction piece can play into the genre of FICTION. Praise to the author of this story.

I blogged about this particular story because it happened to be one of the best NON-FICTION stories that like FICTION.

If you read this blog and read this story in the magazine section of the TIMES, let me know your thoughts.